I love the visual that I get when I read your haiku, I'm just thinking that maybe ices and windows are 2 syllables instead of one and i think it's a 5, 7, 5 line. I could be wrong, however, it's been known to happen.
True poem, I like the realism :)
Great poem description. I like the fact that you can relate to warm breath because its always soo cold when you first turn on the car.Good work!
I love the visual that I get when I read your haiku, I'm just thinking that maybe ices and windows are 2 syllables instead of one and i think it's a 5, 7, 5 line. I could be wrong, however, it's been known to happen.
ReplyDeleteTrue poem, I like the realism :)
ReplyDeleteGreat poem description. I like the fact that you can relate to warm breath because its always soo cold when you first turn on the car.
ReplyDeleteGood work!